First, I really like how this developed since the midterm. If you plan on a massing image, maybe a person for scale. It initially (midterm) seemed a little small to me, but I also tend to like megalithic designs. I read the various colors currently as a stand in for materials, though its equally likely to be programmatic, or just a stylistic choice. I'd suggest making what the purpose of the colors more clear if you are bringing them through to the final.
First, I really like how this developed since the midterm. If you plan on a massing image, maybe a person for scale. It initially (midterm) seemed a little small to me, but I also tend to like megalithic designs. I read the various colors currently as a stand in for materials, though its equally likely to be programmatic, or just a stylistic choice. I'd suggest making what the purpose of the colors more clear if you are bringing them through to the final.
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